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The process of developing characters sometimes forces you to rethink plans.
A book that I've talked a lot about in the past is my Dream Gate Cycles novel. One of the main elements of it is that it features a lot of characters that reappear in later stories. It's main villain is the Legionnaire, who has at least three other planned stories including him as a character. It features Persephone, who is a character in Endymion's story and a very important one. Certain entities that appear in Dream Gate Cycles are a part of my Gaea setting. And the Elder Gods are, of course, a part of every setting for every story I write, even if they don't appear by name (or at all).
And there's a character named Reverend Dr. Eliot White who also appears. Dr. White would later go on to be a central character in the second part of Endymion's trilogy, but the way that Dr. White developed as a character has changed so much as I developed that story that he no longer feels appropriate in his role in Dream Gate Cycles. In DGC, Dr. White is a minor character, not directly an antagonist, but someone who proves a problem for the main character in that his association with the main character creates political problems for him. There were hints of a tragedy to his past, but he was, overall, just another disgusting political figure in a story full of disgusting political figures.
Meanwhile, Dr. White in Endymion's story was meant to be a secondary antagonist. But as I've been developing that story, Dr. White has evolved into a position that is way more complex. The hints of tragedy get fully fleshed out and his position has evolved from a straight up bad guy to a sort of . . . I guess you could say a midway point between the hero and the villain. Dr. White represents the well-intentioned path that Endymion could potentially take that would end with him being every bit as bad as the villain, which is a set-up for the completion of the trilogy's thematic arc in book three. He's not a good-guy per say, but he no longer fits the villain category either. He is, in fact, a blurring of the lines; the character who demonstrates how unclear the line between hero and villain is.
And that really is no longer appropriate for the role he serves in Dream Gate Cycles.
DGC already needs rewriting. Although the actual narrative of that novel is disjointed by design, it's thematic cohesion cannot be disjointed in the same way for it to work, and so the story needs to be reworked in some areas. Knowing that Dr. White has already evolved in a different story to be very different from his initial appearance, do I keep him in the story, or create a new character? It's a question I need to think about and, ultimately, answer.
And I need to start working on these stories again . . .
A book that I've talked a lot about in the past is my Dream Gate Cycles novel. One of the main elements of it is that it features a lot of characters that reappear in later stories. It's main villain is the Legionnaire, who has at least three other planned stories including him as a character. It features Persephone, who is a character in Endymion's story and a very important one. Certain entities that appear in Dream Gate Cycles are a part of my Gaea setting. And the Elder Gods are, of course, a part of every setting for every story I write, even if they don't appear by name (or at all).
And there's a character named Reverend Dr. Eliot White who also appears. Dr. White would later go on to be a central character in the second part of Endymion's trilogy, but the way that Dr. White developed as a character has changed so much as I developed that story that he no longer feels appropriate in his role in Dream Gate Cycles. In DGC, Dr. White is a minor character, not directly an antagonist, but someone who proves a problem for the main character in that his association with the main character creates political problems for him. There were hints of a tragedy to his past, but he was, overall, just another disgusting political figure in a story full of disgusting political figures.
Meanwhile, Dr. White in Endymion's story was meant to be a secondary antagonist. But as I've been developing that story, Dr. White has evolved into a position that is way more complex. The hints of tragedy get fully fleshed out and his position has evolved from a straight up bad guy to a sort of . . . I guess you could say a midway point between the hero and the villain. Dr. White represents the well-intentioned path that Endymion could potentially take that would end with him being every bit as bad as the villain, which is a set-up for the completion of the trilogy's thematic arc in book three. He's not a good-guy per say, but he no longer fits the villain category either. He is, in fact, a blurring of the lines; the character who demonstrates how unclear the line between hero and villain is.
And that really is no longer appropriate for the role he serves in Dream Gate Cycles.
DGC already needs rewriting. Although the actual narrative of that novel is disjointed by design, it's thematic cohesion cannot be disjointed in the same way for it to work, and so the story needs to be reworked in some areas. Knowing that Dr. White has already evolved in a different story to be very different from his initial appearance, do I keep him in the story, or create a new character? It's a question I need to think about and, ultimately, answer.
And I need to start working on these stories again . . .
I'm Not Okay
I think should not have gone quite so detailed as I did about certain things in my last journal. Normally after I write a journal entry, I spend an hour or so looking over it, removing things that shouldn't be there that slip in while writing in the moment. But that flowed out so fast and so hard it put me in a bad emotional state and before I could collect myself, my dad showed up (coming in without knocking, naturally; parents . . .). Hit submit and closed the browser before I had time to think about it. And then I was so busy putting on a happy face for my dad, I didn't have time to think about what I'd written.
Next day, spent all da
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So, graduated recently. That's a significant chunk of time expenditure removed from my life. Now there's just my work taking up time. I'm going to try and get back into writing, but it's been such a long time that it's proving a challenge to clean the rust off. Skills and techniques previously learned are all coming slowly due to such a long period of disuse. It's very frustrating. The stories are still there, the ideas still come, but art isn't found in the idea. Art is in the expression, and my ability to express creaks on its hinges now. Gotta oil things up again.
On that note, I want to try and get back into my Dream Gate Cycles
Busy Busy Busy
Sorry, I know I've got a bunch of comments waiting to be replied to and, to use the scientific term, a metric shit-ton of deviations to look at.
This month has been insane at school. I've had about three assignments due every day in class, which is a workload I've never had before even back in getting my first degree. Plus I'm still working. Bottom line, I am super exhausted and don't feel up to leaving replies these deserve . . .
I'm coming close to the end of the mod, though, and hopefully will be back on my feet soon.
Escape. Finally.
I'm moving out soon, and it's about damn time. There are a lot of reasons I've delayed moving out of my parents' home. Learned helplessness, fear of finding myself unable to take care of myself, laziness, my mom's mind games (don't get me started), but in the last few years, things have gotten . . . bad . . . at home. Very bad. I don't want to go into detail because, frankly, it's painful stuff. It's psychologically traumatizing when some delusions get torn rudely away by the facts of life, and it's even worse when not having the sense to see through it costs you some very dear friends.
But it finally reached a point where it's just got
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